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my super fun holiday

In my holiday i played video games watch t.v.  it was so much fun. i also went outside and played with my brother tag and other games and i  played with him pillow fight and I win we had so much fun in the holidays 

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  1. Mr Sloan16 October 2018 at 11:45

    Good sharing Shammaas. Well done using the the 5w's to plan your ideas. Please proofread your writing and get a buddy to check. You need to work on making your sentences flow and sound like talking.

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  2. Anonymous16 October 2018 at 16:29

    Look for CAPITAL letters and full stops.

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